Intro; Once i went down to manurewa to go to my nana’s house.
P.1 When i went there our whole family was there and i had to sleep in my papa’s room.
P.2 On the 22th of october was my cousin Kerrianne’s birthday for her birthday we went to the otahuhu pools.
P.3 After having a big swim we went back to our nans then we had a big feed then we had a lolly scramble then we had some cake and sang happy birthday to you.
Conclusion:After having everything we played on the bouncy castles and then everything went home and then it was all done.
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