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Wednesday 20 September 2017

The ugly gruffalo.

                                                The ugly gruffalo.                                                                                                                                
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P.1 The gruffalo is hideous. he has sharp claws and terrible jaws with a black tongue and purple spikes on his spine .                                                                                                                                        

P.2 The gruffalo has a big poisonous green wart on the tip of his nose.The gruffalo is very hairy and he
has knobbly knees and on the tip of his head there is two big pointy horns on it.                                

P.3 The gruffalo has a long soft tail on the end of his bottom he has very sharp teeth that has a long fang on the side of his slobbery mouth.He has scary sharp toenails on his foot that are very white.      

P.4 The gruffalo is very big and giant he is the size of an big elephant he is brown and very heavy the gruffalo is very nice and he likes eating some animals.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Cherie, some really fabulous ideas about the Gruffalo. Just wondering why you chose to put p1, p2, p3, p4 in your writing?

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